Pitch Evaluation

Feedback

So, my pitch went well; Neil was fond of the idea. His feedback was simple, 'if it'll look as good as the example, I can't wait to see it'. He also let me know of an error in the current narration - it wasn't 'John Livingston', but 'Jonathan Livingston'.

Lucky Shot

Before the end of the session, I asked him if he had time to listen to an alternate idea about the narration. I threw something at him another lecturer of mine suggested, and that was replacing the story-telling with Shakespeare's Sonnet 18. After reading it, I could see he was very excited about using it - he said "Definately!"

Read more about what followed, in the next post.